Typos List
#1All previous typos have been fixed! Post here any new typos you find! (Make sure to mention the universe)
about light laser
#2it says in description "they were fitted with an improved shielding system, however the structural integrity is the same of that as the Rocket Launcher."
but its structural integrity is 1000 and not 2500 like the Rocket Launcher i think the description should be changed so that will not create confusion
Merged into Typo's ~ Cypher
but its structural integrity is 1000 and not 2500 like the Rocket Launcher i think the description should be changed so that will not create confusion
Merged into Typo's ~ Cypher
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#3Aww man there are so many typo's to list. Will you actually correct them if i bring them to your attention? It may be time-consuming... (I'm talking about grammatical mistakes mainly)
Re: Typos List
#4Sure. We have been through about 4-5 lists already.xNeroX wrote:Aww man there are so many typo's to list. Will you actually correct them if i bring them to your attention? It may be time-consuming... (I'm talking about grammatical mistakes mainly)
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#5Overview Menu
Storage state: Although strictly not incorrect, it could imply "state as in level of damage". I'd recommend this be changed to "Storage used"
Buildings Menu
"83 / 200 Remains 117 Unused Fields" This should read
"83 / 200 Fields in use. 117 Unused Fields"
Crystal Mine:
"Produces Crystal" should be "Produces crystal". (capitals)
Solar Plant:
"All productive buildings need energy to work"
This is misleading, the ship yard is a productive building as it produces ships, yet does not require energy. It should be changed to "All mines need energy to work"
Robot Factory:
"The Factory produces robotic workers who increase the speed of building construction and allow production of the shipyard"
"The factory produces robotic workers that increase the speed of building construction and allow production of the shipyard"
Shipyard:
"Provides space to build aggressive ships and defensive structures."
"Provides space to build offensive ships and defensive structures."
ACS Depot:
"Rockets containing tanks of deuterium can be launched to fuel orbitting friendly ships (ACS defending ships)."
"Rockets containing tanks of deuterium can be launched to fuel orbiting friendly ships (ACS defending ships)."
Missile Silo:
Storage for Antiballistic and Interplanetary missiles.
Storage for antiballistic and interplanetary missiles.
Research Menu
Weapons Technology:
"The weapons technology makes weapons systems more effective. Each level of weapons technology increases the power of weapons of units by 10% of the value base"
"The weapons technology makes weapon systems more effective. Each level of weapons technology increases the power of all unit's weapons by 10% of the value base"
Impulse Engine:
"Impulse engines power is greater than that of combustion engines, each level increases speed by 20%"
"Impulse engine's power is greater than that of combustion engines, each level increases speed by 20%"
Laser Technology:
The concentration of light creates a beam which causes significant damage when touching an object.
The concentration of light creates a beam which causes significant damage when striking an object. (not a mistake, but i think it sounds better)
Ion Technology:
"Causing heavy impact damage, Accelerating ions proves a very effective method of attack ."
"Causing heavy impact damage, accelerating ions proves a very effective method of attack."
Heavy Fighter:
This fighter is better armoured and has a higher attack strength than the light fighter.
Mulitple spellings of the word 'Armour' are found throughout the site. You should choose a spelling and stick to it. Either Armour or Armor. Both are correct, but you should only use one.
Cruiser:
"Cruisers are almost three times more heavily armoured than heavy fighters and have more than twice the firepower.. In addition, they are very fast."
"Cruisers are almost three times more heavily armoured than heavy fighters and have more than twice the firepower. In addition, they are very fast."
Solar Satellite:
"Solar satellites are simple platforms of solar cells, located in a high, stationary orbit. They gather sunlight and transmit it to the ground station via laser."
"Solar satellites are simple platforms of solar cells, located in a high stationary orbit. They gather sunlight and transmit it to the ground station via laser."
Light Laser:
Concentrated firing at a target with photons can produce significantly greater damage than standard ballistic weapons.
Concentrated firing at a target with photons can inflict significantly greater damage than standard ballistic weapons.
Gauss Cannon:
"The Gauss Cannon fires projectiles weighing tons at high speeds."
"The gauss cannon fires projectiles, weighing tons, at high speed."
Ion Cannon:
The Ion Cannon fires a continuous beam of accelerating ions, causing considerable damage to objects it strikes.
The ion cannon fires a continuous beam of accelerating ions, causing considerable damage to objects it strikes.
Small Shield Dome:
The small shield dome covers an entire planet with a field which can absorb a tremendous amount of energy.
The small shield dome covers an entire planet with a field that can absorb a tremendous amount of energy.
Antiballistic Missile:
Anti-Ballistic Missiles destroy attacking interplanetary missiles
Antiballistic missiles destroy attacking interplanetary missiles
Galaxy Menu
0/11 free fleet slots should be
0/11 used fleet slots
Technologies
Fusion Reactor:
"In fusion power plants, hydrogen nuclei are fused into helium nuclei under enormous temperature and pressure, releasing tremendous amounts of energy. For each gram of Deuterium consumed, up to 41,32*10^-13 Joule of energy can be produced; with 1 g you are able to produce 172 MWh energy.
Larger reactor complexes use more deuterium and can produce more energy per hour. The energy effect could be increased by researching energy technology. The energy production of the fusion plant is calculated like that:
30 * [Level Fusion Plant] * (1,05 + [Level Energy Technology] * 0,01) ^ [Level Fusion Plant]"
The delimiters are reversed - periods should be replaced with commas and vice versa
Interplanetary Missiles:
"Interplanetary Missiles (IPM) is your offensive weapon to destroy the defenses of your target. Using state of the art tracking technology, each missile targets a certain number of defenses for destruction. Tipped with an anti-matter bomb, they deliver a destructive force so severe that destroyed shields and defenses cannot be repaired. The only way to counter these missiles is with APMs."
"Interplanetary Missiles (IPM) are your offensive weapon to destroy the defenses of your target. Using state of the art tracking technology, each missile targets a certain number of defenses for destruction. Tipped with anti-matter warheads, they deliver a destructive force so severe that destroyed shields and defenses cannot be repaired. The only way to counter these missiles is with APMs."
Plasma Cannon:
"One of the most advanced defense weapons systems ever developed, the Plasma Turret uses a large nuclear reactor fuel cell to power an electromagnetic accelerator that fires a pulse, or toroid, of plasma. During operation, the Plasma turret first locks in on a target and begins the process of firing. A plasma sphere is created in the turrets core by super heating and compressing gases, stripping them of their ions. Once the gas is superheated, compressed, and a plasma sphere is created, it is then loaded into the electromagnetic accelerator which is then energized. Once fully energized, the accelerator is then activated, which results in the plasma sphere being launched at an extremely high rate of speed to the intended target. From your targets perspective, the approaching bluish ball of plasma is impressive, but once it strikes, it causes instant destruction."
"One of the most advanced defensive weapon systems ever developed, the plasma turret uses a large nuclear reactor fuel cell to power an electromagnetic accelerator that fires a pulse, or toroid, of plasma. During operation, the Plasma turret first locks in on a target and begins the process of firing. A plasma sphere is created in the turrets core by super heating and compressing gases, stripping them of their ions. Once the gas is superheated, compressed, and a plasma sphere is created, it is then loaded into the electromagnetic accelerator which is then energized. Once fully energized, the accelerator is then activated, which results in the plasma sphere being launched at an extremely high speed to the intended target. From your targets perspective, the approaching bluish ball of plasma is impressive, but once it strikes, it causes instant destruction." (Rate of speed implies acceleration, not velocity)
Heavy Laser:
"The Heavy Laser is a practical, improved version of the Light Laser. Being more balanced than the Light Laser with improved alloy composition, stronger, more densely packed beams, and even better onboard targeting systems."
"The Heavy Laser is a practical, improved version of the light laser. Being more balanced than the light laser with improved alloy composition, stronger, more densely packed beams, and has even better onboard targeting systems."
Light Laser:
As technology developed and more sophisticated ships were created, it was determined that a stronger level of defense was needed to counter the attacks. As Laser Technology advanced, a new weapon was designed to provide the next level of defense. Light Lasers are simple ground based weapons that utilizes a special targeting systems to track your enemy and fire a high intensity laser designed to cut through the hull of the target. In order to be kept cost effective, they were fitted with an improved shielding system, however the structural integrity is the same of that as the Rocket Launcher.
As technology developed and more sophisticated ships were created, it was determined that a stronger level of defense was needed to counter the attacks. As laser technology advanced, a new weapon was designed to provide the next level of defense. light lasers are simple ground based weapons that utilizes a special targeting systems to track your enemy and fire a high intensity laser designed to cut through the hull of the target. In order to be kept cost effective, they were fitted with an improved shielding system, however the structural integrity is the same as that of the rocket launcher.
Rocket Launcher:
Your first basic line of defense. These are simple ground based launch facilities that fire conventional warhead tipped missiles at attacking enemy targets. As they are cheap to construct with and no research is required, they are well suited for defending raids, but lose effectiveness defending from larger scale attacks. Once you begin construction on more advanced defense weapons systems, Rocket Launchers become simple fodder to allow your more damaging weapons to inflict greater damage for a longer period of time.
Your first basic line of defense. These are simple ground based launch facilities that fire conventional warhead tipped missiles at attacking enemy targets. As they are cheap to construct and no research is required, they are well suited for defending against raids, but lose effectiveness defending from larger scale attacks. Once you begin construction on more advanced defense weapon systems, rocket launchers become simple fodder to allow your more damaging weapons to inflict greater damage for a longer period of time.
That's about it for now
As you probably guessed, i have bit too much free time on my hands
Storage state: Although strictly not incorrect, it could imply "state as in level of damage". I'd recommend this be changed to "Storage used"
Buildings Menu
"83 / 200 Remains 117 Unused Fields" This should read
"83 / 200 Fields in use. 117 Unused Fields"
Crystal Mine:
"Produces Crystal" should be "Produces crystal". (capitals)
Solar Plant:
"All productive buildings need energy to work"
This is misleading, the ship yard is a productive building as it produces ships, yet does not require energy. It should be changed to "All mines need energy to work"
Robot Factory:
"The Factory produces robotic workers who increase the speed of building construction and allow production of the shipyard"
"The factory produces robotic workers that increase the speed of building construction and allow production of the shipyard"
Shipyard:
"Provides space to build aggressive ships and defensive structures."
"Provides space to build offensive ships and defensive structures."
ACS Depot:
"Rockets containing tanks of deuterium can be launched to fuel orbitting friendly ships (ACS defending ships)."
"Rockets containing tanks of deuterium can be launched to fuel orbiting friendly ships (ACS defending ships)."
Missile Silo:
Storage for Antiballistic and Interplanetary missiles.
Storage for antiballistic and interplanetary missiles.
Research Menu
Weapons Technology:
"The weapons technology makes weapons systems more effective. Each level of weapons technology increases the power of weapons of units by 10% of the value base"
"The weapons technology makes weapon systems more effective. Each level of weapons technology increases the power of all unit's weapons by 10% of the value base"
Impulse Engine:
"Impulse engines power is greater than that of combustion engines, each level increases speed by 20%"
"Impulse engine's power is greater than that of combustion engines, each level increases speed by 20%"
Laser Technology:
The concentration of light creates a beam which causes significant damage when touching an object.
The concentration of light creates a beam which causes significant damage when striking an object. (not a mistake, but i think it sounds better)
Ion Technology:
"Causing heavy impact damage, Accelerating ions proves a very effective method of attack ."
"Causing heavy impact damage, accelerating ions proves a very effective method of attack."
Heavy Fighter:
This fighter is better armoured and has a higher attack strength than the light fighter.
Mulitple spellings of the word 'Armour' are found throughout the site. You should choose a spelling and stick to it. Either Armour or Armor. Both are correct, but you should only use one.
Cruiser:
"Cruisers are almost three times more heavily armoured than heavy fighters and have more than twice the firepower.. In addition, they are very fast."
"Cruisers are almost three times more heavily armoured than heavy fighters and have more than twice the firepower. In addition, they are very fast."
Solar Satellite:
"Solar satellites are simple platforms of solar cells, located in a high, stationary orbit. They gather sunlight and transmit it to the ground station via laser."
"Solar satellites are simple platforms of solar cells, located in a high stationary orbit. They gather sunlight and transmit it to the ground station via laser."
Light Laser:
Concentrated firing at a target with photons can produce significantly greater damage than standard ballistic weapons.
Concentrated firing at a target with photons can inflict significantly greater damage than standard ballistic weapons.
Gauss Cannon:
"The Gauss Cannon fires projectiles weighing tons at high speeds."
"The gauss cannon fires projectiles, weighing tons, at high speed."
Ion Cannon:
The Ion Cannon fires a continuous beam of accelerating ions, causing considerable damage to objects it strikes.
The ion cannon fires a continuous beam of accelerating ions, causing considerable damage to objects it strikes.
Small Shield Dome:
The small shield dome covers an entire planet with a field which can absorb a tremendous amount of energy.
The small shield dome covers an entire planet with a field that can absorb a tremendous amount of energy.
Antiballistic Missile:
Anti-Ballistic Missiles destroy attacking interplanetary missiles
Antiballistic missiles destroy attacking interplanetary missiles
Galaxy Menu
0/11 free fleet slots should be
0/11 used fleet slots
Technologies
Fusion Reactor:
"In fusion power plants, hydrogen nuclei are fused into helium nuclei under enormous temperature and pressure, releasing tremendous amounts of energy. For each gram of Deuterium consumed, up to 41,32*10^-13 Joule of energy can be produced; with 1 g you are able to produce 172 MWh energy.
Larger reactor complexes use more deuterium and can produce more energy per hour. The energy effect could be increased by researching energy technology. The energy production of the fusion plant is calculated like that:
30 * [Level Fusion Plant] * (1,05 + [Level Energy Technology] * 0,01) ^ [Level Fusion Plant]"
The delimiters are reversed - periods should be replaced with commas and vice versa
Interplanetary Missiles:
"Interplanetary Missiles (IPM) is your offensive weapon to destroy the defenses of your target. Using state of the art tracking technology, each missile targets a certain number of defenses for destruction. Tipped with an anti-matter bomb, they deliver a destructive force so severe that destroyed shields and defenses cannot be repaired. The only way to counter these missiles is with APMs."
"Interplanetary Missiles (IPM) are your offensive weapon to destroy the defenses of your target. Using state of the art tracking technology, each missile targets a certain number of defenses for destruction. Tipped with anti-matter warheads, they deliver a destructive force so severe that destroyed shields and defenses cannot be repaired. The only way to counter these missiles is with APMs."
Plasma Cannon:
"One of the most advanced defense weapons systems ever developed, the Plasma Turret uses a large nuclear reactor fuel cell to power an electromagnetic accelerator that fires a pulse, or toroid, of plasma. During operation, the Plasma turret first locks in on a target and begins the process of firing. A plasma sphere is created in the turrets core by super heating and compressing gases, stripping them of their ions. Once the gas is superheated, compressed, and a plasma sphere is created, it is then loaded into the electromagnetic accelerator which is then energized. Once fully energized, the accelerator is then activated, which results in the plasma sphere being launched at an extremely high rate of speed to the intended target. From your targets perspective, the approaching bluish ball of plasma is impressive, but once it strikes, it causes instant destruction."
"One of the most advanced defensive weapon systems ever developed, the plasma turret uses a large nuclear reactor fuel cell to power an electromagnetic accelerator that fires a pulse, or toroid, of plasma. During operation, the Plasma turret first locks in on a target and begins the process of firing. A plasma sphere is created in the turrets core by super heating and compressing gases, stripping them of their ions. Once the gas is superheated, compressed, and a plasma sphere is created, it is then loaded into the electromagnetic accelerator which is then energized. Once fully energized, the accelerator is then activated, which results in the plasma sphere being launched at an extremely high speed to the intended target. From your targets perspective, the approaching bluish ball of plasma is impressive, but once it strikes, it causes instant destruction." (Rate of speed implies acceleration, not velocity)
Heavy Laser:
"The Heavy Laser is a practical, improved version of the Light Laser. Being more balanced than the Light Laser with improved alloy composition, stronger, more densely packed beams, and even better onboard targeting systems."
"The Heavy Laser is a practical, improved version of the light laser. Being more balanced than the light laser with improved alloy composition, stronger, more densely packed beams, and has even better onboard targeting systems."
Light Laser:
As technology developed and more sophisticated ships were created, it was determined that a stronger level of defense was needed to counter the attacks. As Laser Technology advanced, a new weapon was designed to provide the next level of defense. Light Lasers are simple ground based weapons that utilizes a special targeting systems to track your enemy and fire a high intensity laser designed to cut through the hull of the target. In order to be kept cost effective, they were fitted with an improved shielding system, however the structural integrity is the same of that as the Rocket Launcher.
As technology developed and more sophisticated ships were created, it was determined that a stronger level of defense was needed to counter the attacks. As laser technology advanced, a new weapon was designed to provide the next level of defense. light lasers are simple ground based weapons that utilizes a special targeting systems to track your enemy and fire a high intensity laser designed to cut through the hull of the target. In order to be kept cost effective, they were fitted with an improved shielding system, however the structural integrity is the same as that of the rocket launcher.
Rocket Launcher:
Your first basic line of defense. These are simple ground based launch facilities that fire conventional warhead tipped missiles at attacking enemy targets. As they are cheap to construct with and no research is required, they are well suited for defending raids, but lose effectiveness defending from larger scale attacks. Once you begin construction on more advanced defense weapons systems, Rocket Launchers become simple fodder to allow your more damaging weapons to inflict greater damage for a longer period of time.
Your first basic line of defense. These are simple ground based launch facilities that fire conventional warhead tipped missiles at attacking enemy targets. As they are cheap to construct and no research is required, they are well suited for defending against raids, but lose effectiveness defending from larger scale attacks. Once you begin construction on more advanced defense weapon systems, rocket launchers become simple fodder to allow your more damaging weapons to inflict greater damage for a longer period of time.
That's about it for now
As you probably guessed, i have bit too much free time on my hands
Re: Typos List
#8xNeroX wrote:That's the speed universe btw, not sure about the others
Good one, it will be reviewed in our next typos update. Btw, the Capitals for building/ship names etc are not to be considered as typos.
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#9Standard Universe:
Ion Technology
Simply put, an ion is an atom or a group of atoms that has acquired a net electric charge by gaining or losing one or more electrons. Utilized in advanced weapons systems, a consentrated beam of Ions can cause considerable damage to objects that it strikes.
I believe the portion I put in boldface should read "concentrated"
Ion Technology
Simply put, an ion is an atom or a group of atoms that has acquired a net electric charge by gaining or losing one or more electrons. Utilized in advanced weapons systems, a consentrated beam of Ions can cause considerable damage to objects that it strikes.
I believe the portion I put in boldface should read "concentrated"
Ní mar a shíltear a bhítear.
Ní féidir maraigh tú an Dullahan
Níl luibh ná leigheas in aghaidh an bháis.
Ní féidir maraigh tú an Dullahan
Níl luibh ná leigheas in aghaidh an bháis.
Re: Typos List
#10Not sure if it works in all universe's but when you submit an alliance application and it tells you you can either withdraw the app or continue waiting in the tab at the top it is in German.
