no..you may stay....thier is only room for one person on the ships. if thier is more than one person on the ship then we cant risk you taking up space.the laPtop goes blank. the ships fly off.

*I reach the downed ship*

a small beetly like robot jumps from the ship and goes inside the rubble. i am downloaded to it.

I wonder where a narrator is...

(this is where you come in altervetok )

Then all of a sudden, BOOM, and explosion in Iowa!!

(ok terror. dont post spam on here agian. we are trying to make a good story and your ruining it. )

The ship seems to be a downed a hundred years

(Sorry for casuing the spam, also, if the time of the ship has already been said, sorry, I will try to catch up with the story.)

(ok first of all..i know its alot but read the entire story from page 1. 2nd we already have a narrator his name is commet. 3rd. IT JUST CRASHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(O.k. thanks for the update).

I somehow find where the ship is at and i see the robots explained a few posts ago, I look on the internet to see what type they are and how the heck they control the downed shp.

i look at this happening and decide to try to sneak out undetedected
and look where i am
(srry that it took a while)
(profile)
nam:setesh
race:imorian planet deep in Galactic Fleet terretory
gender:male
profession:mercenary

Must be an amazing robot, wonder if I should go check them out? Once i walk in to find them, one jumps me from behind. (how tall are they?)