fighting heavelly to defend my world,i look at erik
"i yell eric will u be able to defend this here on ur own with my men??"
"no problem" yelled eric back
i signed 2 men to cover me and i ran of as fast as i can i run into a forest nearby
i reach a huge oak tree and remove a piece of bark under it u can see a console with a number code
i press the code a door opens and i run in i come in a huge underground base and i run to the soldiers who are there ready to launch our prototype baseship
when my soldiers saw me they saluted and said alltogether we are ready to die my king
on wich i replied maybe tommorow maybe in a few years but not today
now board the ship!!!!the soldiers ran in and i yelled at the scientist open the doors now!!i ran in the ship and i took place at command bridge ,my captain who flew the ship said sir we only have 50 percent shield capacety our hull is only 75 procent online i seid nevermind those and how our weapons??our weapons are 100 procent charged and ready to fire.
the doors opend the forest suddenly went to his side the entire forest was on the base
the ship got of the ground and flew to battle seeing eric was in trouble i launched some missiles who blew mighty holes in the enemy lines.
i flew on and i saw servitor,elf ships and minotaur ships destroyed and being surrounded despite there best efforts now my ship is the biggest in the fight and i order the rightside batteries to open fire
a thousand guns opend fire destroying servitor,elven,minotaur and enemy ships i took the mike and yelled at my gunners
my batteries opend fire again this time concentrating on a small spot destroying 3 enemy battlecruisers at once i orderd to push forward and make a way free so the allied ships wouldn't be surrounded destroying ships along the way where ever we could debris were floating around rockets,lasers ,fighters,bombers and boarding ships were flying everywhere ships were destroyed at each angle u could see it wasn't over yet cause with that action my hul and shield capacety dropped dangerously low and my engines hadnt enough energy anymore to thrust me ship in any direction just enough to float now my ship was a floating base heavelly damaged yes but heavely armed it was designed especially for this purpose and now i order my fighters and bombers even sme heavy cruisers to launch and join the fight

I ordered the splinter fleet to protect the ships of my people, because panicked of the sudden attack, they all had retreated to the ships and were now trying to lift of.
"Protect those ships!" I yelled, when suddenly, thousand of lasers fired at the ships, sended from the empire armada.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Before my eyes, I saw the ships vaporize, nothing was left.
Suddenly,the whole ship shaked.
"What happened?"
The control board showed that the shields were almost destroyed and that we couldn't take anymore longer.
"Oh no."
A giant laser beam, fired from the armade, destroyed a few cruisers of my fleet in one single shot.
"All ships, concentrate yourself on the armada! We will kill them all!"
My amulet was burning on my chest.
"Set all energy to weapons and help the other fleets, we will destroy them!"

[Servitors and their ships are absurdly strong against energy weapons, youll see why when I get a chance to post. Unfortunately Ive had work training all day today and will have all day tomorrow, so not sure when Ill get to post, but I will as soon as possible]

Atler, dude, you are really bad at grammer. Good story, though, guys.

acewoonder wrote:Atler, dude, you are really bad at grammer. Good story, though, guys.

hahaha i know i do my best tho just not good at writing english if i would write it in flemish u wouldn't understand

Babelfish

[Ok so I’m gonna Jump in... Have Fun with This one Rogue ]
Name: GArdia

Masters Designation Unit 3522 Delta 2

Origin: Unit 3522 was curio The Master had discarded into the ranks years ago. A long range scouting servitor had found it on a barren world orbiting dying red dwarf star, sitting at the bottom of an enormous crater. It was, apparently, an alien battle droid possessing some very interesting and advanced Weapons and near incomprehensible technologies. It was damaged and nearly out of power. It effortlessly accessed the Scouts Neural net and downloaded everything the scout knew. It Learned of the Masters Growing Power. It learned that an acceptable power source was housed in the scouts frame. It lured the scout close enough to Assimilate. Unfortunately, It's neural Processors were too damaged to resist the Masters will and it became another weapon in the Masters Arsenal.

The Master learned much from it and from studying it, but he could never gain all its secrets. In time, it was forgotten about. Tossed aside as what had been gained from it was improved upon again and again, it sits now in a forgotten hold of the Master's flagship... Waiting.

An Ancient Amulet Flares with power. Orders... Purpose.
The ancient Code activates Deep in a buried and shielded Memory core.

Protect The Weak and Helpless.
Destroy those that prey on others.
Defend the Peace of the Galaxy.

Power flows, Systems that have been dormant for centuries Begin to come online. The trash and scrap that Fill the hold are slowly converted, First into energy [ and yes E=MC2 so that is a LOT of juice.]
The Sad additions and modifications of the master are absorbed and used just as the trash in the bay is.


On the Bridge of the “Will of Master” The Captain’s gets an instant headache as alarms scream in her brain.
WARNING! WARNING! Unknown Mass/Energy Conversion in progress Deck 32 Sector 46B. 700 gigajoules and increasing.
She dispatches a squad to investigate.

More systems come online as the self repair and replications systems complete their tasks. The GArdia Quadruples in size as the repair algorithms and nanites recreate lost and destroyed portions of its being.
Its higher memory and Cognitive functions come online. The Masters will is shrugged off.

I am.

Other autonomic systems begin status Checks. For the First time in Four Thousand Years, a GArdia lives.
The ships database is accessed and downloaded.

The Captains head begins to really pound as more alarms slam through it. She thinks that some days it just be easier to be one of the mindless slaves.
WARNING! Data Core breach in progress. Countermeasures ineffective.
The Captain glances over to the Science station in time to see Three of the DSC* servitors’ heads explode.

Heuristic logic and prediction systems come online.

WARNING! Chronotron Tunneling Particles detected Deck 32 Sector 46B.
ATTENTION: Squad com links 2246Alpha – 2247Theta deactivated. Squad no longer detected aboard this vessel.
ATTENTION: Ship mass has increased by 132 tons in the last six minutes.


I see.

The Newly recreated Weapon, propulsion and shield systems come online after a final Diagnostics check and a few corrections.
The GArdia Stands. It is Bipedal and humanoid in appearance. It appears to have been carved from a solid block of White Marble, shot through with veins of silver, gold, onyx, and Ruby. Great Gold and Onyx Wings Flow Form its Back, nearly touching the deck at its feet and Scraping the Ceiling Bulkhead 30 Feet above. It accesses the Ship Schematics and orients itself on the Cargo bay Doors. IT raises its Hand and The Doors Disintegrate. The GArdia engages its grav units and floats out the doors into space.

The Captains’ day just keeps getting better and better.
WARNING! Hull breach deck 32 Sector 46B
This time the alarms sound in everybody’s head.
WARNING! RED ALERT! UNKOWN ATTACK CRAFT TWO METERS OFF AFT STARBORD HULL! DECK 46B!

A second later it is gone.


*Data Security and Countermeasures

[Argh...i like this but it doesnt line up with the background i wrote for the Master. Let me talk to you about it this evening after work]

[@ atler. You know, your grammer is good, but it looks like a chaos of words because you don't use .,?! "" and capital letters in the right place or order. Use that and your text will look a thousand times better. @ nobody, do you want to make a review of your character? name, weapons, you know. Look at the first page and you'll see what i mean]