Re: New ZE tour + trailer
All the text in the tour makes it feel really exciting, and I wanted to commend the crators for doing such a good job with it. However, there are some places where the phrasing is a bit awkward, so I took a swing at rewording it. Original text has "%" in front, grammar comments are in (): %Welcome t...
- Forum: Announcements
- Topic: New ZE tour + trailer
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- Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:17 pm
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